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 Posted: Tue Jul 7th, 2020 11:42 am
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RainyDayMan



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I don't feel like the song has found it's core message yet, or if it has, it hasn't come across to me.

The emotion of insecurity comes thru, with that explicit line but also "Take my crown" and "Not my life" and others as well.

But beyond that, I'm not sure how I am supposed to feel about the singer or the situation.

The structure looks sound and very singable so the framework is there.

What is it you want the listener to feel, think or experience having listened to your song?



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