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 Posted: Tue Jun 30th, 2020 10:25 pm
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Andrea

 

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Location: Poughkeepsie, New York USA
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I started working on this, and like where it is going. But, I would like some feedback and other ideas. The beginning gives an idea of where it is going. The you will see there are a bunch of ideas. I would like to know which ones people like the most, and/or other ideas I could use that would be better.

You are the sun in the sky
tears in my eyes
you know you have me twisted

You are the kiss on my lips
lunar eclipse
you know you have me twisted

You say you love me today
promise you'll stay
come morning your in the wind

Chorus
Damn it boy, you have me twisted
my insides are out
all my beliefs are now doubts
I love you too much
How I wish you never existed
Damn it boy, you have me twisted

You are my warm sandy beach
blood sucking leech
You know you have me twisted

You are breeze through my sails
gutted entrails
you know you have me twisted

You are my breath of fresh air
recurring nightmare (too many syllables)
you know you have me twisted

You are my life saving prayer
electric chair
you know you have me twisted

you're my security vault
San Andreas Fault
you know you have me twisted

You are the bird in the cage
Rockstar on stage
you know you have me twisted


All ideas and feedback are welcome. Thanks!



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