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 Posted: Thu Jun 18th, 2020 03:09 pm
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RainbowKeeper



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Hey Andrea,
Thanks for your feedback! Judge is a perfect idea as a change for the doubled line! Thank you! Didn’t even think of this rhyme. The line paper doesn’t blush ...well in fact I have chosen a German Idiom and looked it up in an English idioms book. I found the blush line added to the patient line saying, that the meaning is the same. So I took both lines and constructed my B out of it. But you can be sure that I’ll keep your idea in mind if I’m going to work on this piece later on!

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