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 Posted: Thu Jun 18th, 2020 12:55 pm
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Hi RK, this one feels like you wrote it for yourself and about yourself. Writing as therapy - it makes a lot of sense and I like it. I am not sure I connect with 'paper doesn't blush'. Maybe, it doesn't judge? Not sure.

I agree with RDM, the chorus would fit nicely between A and A+



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