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 Posted: Tue Jun 16th, 2020 02:46 am
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RainbowKeeper



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Uhh I just noticed Andrea‘s fine piece of writing here. Very well done!
The only line that makes me frown is:
Creatures step into the night...seems a bit long in that place. But can also be my imagination. But I had to stop and read the verse once again...uh maybe I’m just tired....sooo tirhakdbdidkdjeienwllo jekeienebekdndk.....snooooor......



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Interested in convos about good music and specially about songwriting, lyrics and ideas. All my stuff is protected! copyright by FabIan Peters

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