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 Posted: Sun Jun 14th, 2020 10:43 pm
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Motorist Sketchbook



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Andrea wrote: Thanks Sketch. I think this fits much better!

I made a few tweaks using your suggestions. I was able to slightly shorten a couple of the last verse lines. Possibly more could go if necessary. If the final verse makes sense as a chorus, then woo hoo!

Yes, this is looking good.
Let's see what others can bring to the review. Thanks.

- Sketch



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