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 Posted: Sun Jun 14th, 2020 10:06 pm
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Andrea

 

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Thanks Sketch. I think this fits much better!

I made a few tweaks using your suggestions. I was able to slightly shorten a couple of the last verse lines. Possibly more could go if necessary. If the final verse makes sense as a chorus, then woo hoo!



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