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 Posted: Thu Apr 30th, 2020 11:27 pm
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RainbowKeeper



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Heya,
I checked this one out, too.
I must say that I really like this one! The lyrics are good, the sound is great and not to loud and the music fits it. I specially like the piano „intermezzo“. Nicely done!!
Just one thing, I think you could get a little bit more out of this one when you work a little bit more with your voice. From what I heared your voice is capable of more...interacting, so why not? I personally would like to hear some parts sing a little higher, more like real preaching. With a little more „pressure“ behind it. I think it would sound great!

But year, all in all I can say that I really like this piece!

Cheerio
RK



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