View single post by RainbowKeeper
 Posted: Fri Apr 24th, 2020 10:05 am
PMQuoteReplyFull Topic

Joined: Fri Feb 14th, 2020
Location: Germany
Posts: 746
Hello rdm,

Every idea is welcome. And I have to say that the lines you mentioned are definitely the weakest ones in this piece. I wanted to show the connection of being beautiful and useful for us humans, somehow. But while writing it I kept the possibility to rearrange the A+ part and maybe put the lines of A* in as the first 4 lines. But I’m not sure yet.
The c-part can be shortened up. I guess this comes when I sing it after all.
This song became a „conceptual work“ means it’s already hanging on a wall (with a German translation next to it) and 3 paintings made by myself which show the steps of „transformation“. The patients of the office like it a lot.


Hey y’all !
Im new here and tryin to figure out how this forum works!
Interested in convos about good music and specially about songwriting, lyrics and ideas. All my stuff is protected! copyright by FabIan Peters

Close Window