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 Posted: Wed Mar 18th, 2020 10:56 pm
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Joined: Fri Feb 14th, 2020
Location: Germany
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Hey blm,

Ty for your comment! I really appreciate it!
At the moment I write very personal stuff that’s true. And I already wrote the next one a day after this piece here.

You are right about the change from the perspective of a „viewer“ to the Ego/I. I tried to build a bridge that helps with that change by writing the line:
And might help people like me

So the B and C Parts are my personal feelings and thoughts about the Situation. Very much self-reflecting I must say. But I also wanted to finish the whole circle with the right images and pictures that makes this song complete.
The c- part is a bit difficult but I guess I know what you mean with this hard cut there, but somehow it is what I wanted to have.
I want a music change exactly on that part and a more clear sounding voice singing those words. A little bit as if it is some kind of wishful thought or dream sequence.
From all the difficult searching for the right way u are somehow able to „just“ let it go. But I still dunno if the image of „flying“ fits in.
When I wrote it I thought: when do you see everything? When can you go where you want to go? If you are above it all....And that’s why I have chosen that way of saying it. But maybe you know the feeling....if u think it’s not good nuff but you don’t know how to make it better?! Hard to explain, but I even can’t put my finger on the thing that disturbs me. Maybe it’s the thing that I just need someone, only one person, that says....I know what you mean there! ?!
I don’t know.

But I truly feel great to get a comment from you.
I always use my lyrics and songs as some kind of diary and so it makes me really proud if ppl like what I do. But I am also always open for discussions, that only help us to grow.
So ty again for your words!

Hey y’all !
Im new here and tryin to figure out how this forum works!
Interested in convos about good music and specially about songwriting, lyrics and ideas. All my stuff is protected! copyright by FabIan Peters

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