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 Posted: Sat Mar 14th, 2020 10:07 pm
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RainbowKeeper



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Ok guys, I worked a little on it and made it a little shorter. Please let me know if it’s better now. Thanx!

Candle

I’ve been lit up in December
Since then I wear my fire crown
I have seen so many changes
That have turned the world upside down
Loved these times of celebrations
When my light made people smile
When my bright flame burnt full of joy
My flame crackled once in a while

Sometimes I brought light to darkness
I ignited gloomy hours
And I helped many through their grief
Gleaming then with all my powers
Sometimes I burnt because of love
Cause of this warm tingling feeling
When my sparks ignited cold hearts
And my light promised some healing

Candle glowing candlelight
Danger and romance are combined
Candle glowing candlelight
Shining strong, shining kind
Candle glowing candlelight
But in any flame a conflagration is hidden inside
That‘s what you should keep in mind

I give away this comfort feeling
While I truly burn myself
I give away this comfort feeling
We‘ll make it through the night
I give away this warm comfort feeling
While I truly burn myself
I give away this comfort feeling
But can’t you sense my inner fright?
Cause I truly burn myself
Tears of wax roll down my skin
I hide my troubles deep within

Some see my flame dancing wildly
They think I burn in ecstasy
They don’t know and they won’t listen
How hard this fight may be for me

© by Ian P.
Words by Ian P.
06/14.03.20
for: Valentine+B



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