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 Posted: Mon Mar 9th, 2020 02:24 am
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Motorist Sketchbook

Joined: Sat Apr 28th, 2018
Location: Minneapolis, Minnesota USA
Posts: 1125
Yes, this is quite wordy. (too many words)

If you had to edit it to half this length, what would you remove?
You would probably toss the mediocre lines and keep the best ones.
Thus a great improvement would happen.


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