|View single post by Motorist Sketchbook|
|Posted: Mon Mar 9th, 2020 02:24 am||
|Yes, this is quite wordy. (too many words)
If you had to edit it to half this length, what would you remove?
You would probably toss the mediocre lines and keep the best ones.
Thus a great improvement would happen.
Blue Collar Road Scholar
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