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 Posted: Sat Mar 7th, 2020 08:29 pm
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Billy_Lunch_Money



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Thanks to Andrea's input on this I think it's almost complete. I'm going to put Andreas contributions in italics! that way everyone can see the progress.


I feel the ache in my bones, down to the marrow.
The tears you stole from me, still your heart's frozen cold
Deceived by the lies you told, as you dug your own hole.

There is nothing left for us here anymore

I don't want to be here no more, Just let me go!
It will do us more harm. Just let me go!


The lies that I forgave, now burn like hot coals
The stories you sold yourself and the people you told.
The years took there tole on me, your heart’s made of stone.

There is nothing left for us here anymore

I don't want to be here no more, Just let me go!
It will do us more harm. Just let me go!


I've got nowhere to go, I think you should know.
There's a wound where my heart used to be, and it burns to my soul.
Wish the skies would open, and swallow me whole.

There is nothing left for us here anymore

I don't want to be here no more, Just let me go!
It will do us more harm, sugar. Just let me go!

I don't want to be here no more, Just let me go!
It will do us more harm, sugar. Just let me go!



Also at some point tonight I've assembled (See link in my previous post) a backing for for it and slap it on sound cloud. At least that way you can get a feel for how it goes.



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I'm taking a little break from writing and posting lyrics. But it doesn't mean I'm taking a break from TSF, just strengthening my musical skills.

https://soundcloud.com/elijah-falls
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