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 Posted: Fri Mar 6th, 2020 02:24 am
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RainbowKeeper



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Hey there,
I know it’s me again...once again....and I’m sorry that I have to post again, but I would appreciate some feedback to my idea I had this night. I’m not really happy with it but somehow I don’t know how else I should have written it. But somehow I have the feeling that I wrote 2 songs in one. So please, I count on you!

Candle

I’ve been lit up in December
Since then I wear my fire crown
I have seen so many changes
That have turned the world upside down
Loved these times of celebrations
When my light made people smile
When my bright flame burnt full of joy
My flame crackled once in a while

Sometimes I brought light to darkness
I ignited gloomy hours
And I helped many through their grief
Gleaming then with all my powers
Sometimes I burnt because of love
Cause of this warm tingling feeling
When my sparks ignited cold hearts
And my light promised some healing

Candle glowing candlelight
Danger and romance are combined
Candle glowing candlelight
Shining strong, shining kind
Candle glowing candlelight
Danger and romance are combined
But in any flame a big fire is hidden inside
That‘s what you should keep in mind

I give away this warm comfort feeling
While I truly burn myself
I give away this warm comfort feeling
I help you make it through the night
I give away this warm comfort feeling
While I truly burn myself
I give away this warm comfort feeling
Can’t you sense my inner fright?
I give away this warm comfort feeling
While I truly burn myself
And all these storms and rain outside
May extinguish this candle‘s light

Some see my flame dancing wildly
They think I burn in ecstasy
They don’t know and they won’t listen
That this is a hard fight for me
Wind can take away my fire
And tears of wax roll down my skin
Some smoke is all I left behind
I hide my troubles deep within

© by Ian P.
Words by Ian P.
06.03.2020
for: Valentine+B

Tyvm! RK



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