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 Posted: Thu Feb 27th, 2020 08:00 pm
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RainbowKeeper



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I do hate this feeling A‘
I don’t know what to do
You see the way we met
Was in a book or two
The whole crowd was moving
We locked eyes for a few

But now you’re acting strange
Frail wings won’t set us free A+
May‘ we were flying to high
Icarus has told me
The truth is I’m treading
To stay above the top
But how can I reach thee?

How did we get here?
From dancing on the clouds
Hardly breathin‘
Now on our way down B
How did we get here?
Ain’t no crown
We’re coming down
Yeah- We‘re coming down

You know I truly hate this feeling
Tell me what I could do
You know I truly hate this feeling
Like hard rain we’re coming down C
You know I truly hate this feeling
Say what could I do?
But I can sense it
This is through

At the heavens of love
But now we’re coming down A*
There’s no more me and you
Cause we’re down yeah we’re down
(Fade)

Sorry but I got an image in my head so that I started writing it „into“ your lyrics. But I think it fits. I also had to come up with some „filling“ words so that all the lines in the verses have the same syllables (uh what a word.....) anyway now every line in the verses is a 6‘ line.
I tried to stay as close to your lyrics and images as possible and well after all it’s only an idea if you don’t like it just forget about it.
Btw while I was hand writing your lyrics I got the „in a book or two“ part. Silly that I had to write it down with my own hands to understand it completely. Well sometimes that’s the way it is.
Anyway I hope u like it and if not, just say „no but thank you“ and we’re good.

Cheerio
Ian

Last edited on Fri Feb 28th, 2020 02:27 am by RainbowKeeper



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