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 Posted: Wed Feb 26th, 2020 09:04 pm
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Song title: Coming Down

V1:
I hate this feeling
Don’t know what to do
The way we met
Was in a book or two
The crowd was movin’
We locked eyes for a few

C:
How did we get here
From dancing on the clouds
Hardly breathin’
On our way down
We’re dog fightin’
Ain’t no crown
We’re coming down
We’re coming down

B:
You’re acting strange
Don’t know what to believe
Say love is an ocean
So, I’ll surf the sea
Truth is I’m treading
To stay above the top
But it’s something I can’t see

C:
How did we get here
From dancing on the clouds
Now we’re hardly breathing
On our way down
We’re dog fighting
And ain’t no crown
We’re coming down
We’re coming down

V2:
I hate this feeling
I know what to do
The way we met
Was in a book or two
The time has come
This is through

R:
We’re coming down
We’re done
No more me and you

-Sensus

Hey guys! I would very much appreciate feedback! Let me know what I can improve on. Also, feel free to tell what you interpret this song is about! I’d love to see if I’m getting thru my message objectively! Thanks 🙏 -Sensus

Last edited on Thu Feb 27th, 2020 02:51 am by BDT53

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