View single post by RainbowKeeper
 Posted: Tue Feb 18th, 2020 05:05 pm
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Joined: Fri Feb 14th, 2020
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I like your second one! Even if it also rhymes with my B. Would cause ehhhmmm....3x back after another, if i saw it right.

And if u really want to start with one of your lines, My preference is the first: „do you remember...“ because it shows that there are two ppl involved right from the start. It’s still as if someone tells the story but there ain’t a minor and mayor character in it, and so this would be clear right away.

Hey y’all !
Im new here and tryin to figure out how this forum works!
Interested in convos about good music and specially about songwriting, lyrics and ideas. All my stuff is protected! copyright by FabIan Peters

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