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 Posted: Tue Feb 18th, 2020 12:02 am
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Andrea

 

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I get the plugged ears too. For me it is allergies. If you can sing it, I am game - when you are ready.

I think we may have to settle on those two lines we aren't happy with. Let's each come up with 2 or 3 options and agree on one. I have heard so many "dumb" lines in songs on the radio, so oh well!

I am having a harder time with the beginning, but maybe if I heard your idea for singing it I may be persuaded. I will keep and open mind. I will also keep thinking of a compromise :)

As far as the end goes, it's just gramatical. If I am wrong, then ok.

I will try to produce some more ideas by tomorrow :)



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