|View single post by Andrea|
|Posted: Mon Feb 17th, 2020 10:41 pm||
|RK, I didn't notice the change to steel, but I like it.
Is this too goofy to replace zodiac and black?
Nothing could make us crack
Yeah, nothing could make us crack
I liked the idea of mending cracks, a strong base/foundation.
Or, something like weathered storms, together intact...
Last lines: I think I am having a gramatical issue. How about?
Be forever yours
Be forever mine
As for the beginning. V2: baring our souls was a continuation of V1. Starting with baring our souls seems out of place to me. I haven't thought of an alternative,or a way around V1, but I will keep thinking.
Do you sing? Maybe you have a tune in your head that would me?
Thanks again for all the help