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 Posted: Tue Feb 4th, 2020 07:54 pm
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A friend of mine said the same thing about the verses being short. I guess I went overboard culling lines. As for the marrow/stone lines, yeah I do struggle singing and play guitar at that point. plus it truly does need a bridge/middle 8, but nothing springs to mind at the moment, I was kind of hoping that by getting the body sorted it would come too. I've got time, I'll leave it for a few days, see if anyone else has any additional advice before having another bash at it.

Last edited on Tue Feb 4th, 2020 07:58 pm by Billy_Lunch_Money

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