View single post by RainyDayMan
 Posted: Mon Jan 20th, 2020 08:54 am
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Thing that struck me with this one is how quickly "long, long day/night" is sung - the opposite of what the words mean! It might take some re-arranging but I think it might work better if you could stretch those out or give them some space.

I do like the "long long day into the night" phrase. That feels like it has legs.

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