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 Posted: Sat Jan 18th, 2020 07:37 am
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jamestoffee



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I like the way the melody is sung in a conversational style.

The concept of waiting by a phone is pretty universal, but it would make more sense this line be changed from....

And I sit wondering if I
still love you

TO

And I sit wondering if YOU
still love ME

Because if it's self-reflection, the singer doesn't need to hear from the singee what the singer thinks for themselves...What the singer might question is if the silence from the singee means the singee no longer loves the singer.

Thanks for sharing.

James



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