|View single post by RainyDayMan|
|Posted: Fri Nov 15th, 2019 12:59 am||
|Great that you're thinking about how this is going to sound and be sung.
That comes through very clearly in how you're writing the lyric.
Some nice lines there like:
Come on tell me the truth now
Make me believe it
but overall it feels like the lyric is a vehicle for the singer to express themselves via the singing rather than the words themselves.
And there's nothing wrong in that! Feels like a good fit for an R&B song.
One to be heard rather than read I think.