|View single post by jamestoffee|
|Posted: Mon Nov 4th, 2019 09:59 am||
|Nice delivery on playing and singing.
I would have liked the voice louder and uke softer. Also, slowing the tempo may add more weight to the bluesy of the song. I like when you did stop chords...maybe that could be done earlier in the song as well for contrast/dynamics.
Lyrically, consider sensory details to draw in the listener.
it's about anxiety & depression more than external factors like losing a job or relationship issues.
I could not understand this from the lyrics themselves. Maybe you could personify the fear/ anxiety & depression.
Thanks for sharing.