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 Posted: Mon Sep 23rd, 2019 12:04 am
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SongWriterJoe



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I like this, but dunno.. Seems like it has a lot of dead wood which would make it difficult to sing..

Something more like this, being sure to count syllables:

I was just sittin' on a barstool in Tucson
When your ex came and sat next ta me
Wearing new jeans, fancy boots, and black Stetson
Like any other ol' cowboy wannabe.



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