|View single post by SongWriterJoe|
|Posted: Mon Sep 23rd, 2019 12:04 am||
|I like this, but dunno.. Seems like it has a lot of dead wood which would make it difficult to sing..
Something more like this, being sure to count syllables:
I was just sittin' on a barstool in Tucson
When your ex came and sat next ta me
Wearing new jeans, fancy boots, and black Stetson
Like any other ol' cowboy wannabe.
"I'm not sure if my heart is in my music - or my music is in my heart!"