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 Posted: Sat Sep 21st, 2019 09:48 am
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RainyDayMan



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Well I'm fine with "heart on deceive", but I get stuck on "tryna taking control". Shouldn't that be "tryna take control"?

But I like the overall narrative and the play on words.



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