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 Posted: Thu Sep 19th, 2019 12:31 pm
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bunnythesinger



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MP , I really like the chorus on this song. Personally, I am struggling with the verse/bridge "I can't imagine life without you...". I am no pro when it comes to this, so there is a good chance Ive read it wrong. In the remainder of the song, it felt like he was regretting what 'wasn't, but might have been' and this section, made me think they actually had gotten together.
Now, I pulled those 4 lines out and found a great song. I like it a lot...and I really like the use of a prelude verse at the opening of the song, harkens me back to the original versions of Stardust and other songs. Its a very nice touch.
Overall, I like it a lot.

Bunny



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