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 Posted: Thu Sep 12th, 2019 08:22 pm
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cmaja



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Hey SW Joe,
I can’t seem to identify the chorus. Is V1 four stanzas or is the first stanza the chorus? I love the lyric; it’s perfectly singable, but I’m a little confused.

On the last line of the first stanza did you mean “use to be’s” or is “use to he’s” your intent?

Charles



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