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 Posted: Tue Sep 10th, 2019 08:53 pm
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Kellyanneg

 

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Owen, great tune. Your structure is great, love the chords and contrast with the chorus, prechorus etc...it's a great song! I did find that I was expecting a a peak in the song before the final chorus. A melodic change. Something to make the bridge stand out? Just an "ear"/feel thing. Great writing, and well-suited for the current issues of society. Well done. Your melodys are great!

Last edited on Tue Sep 10th, 2019 09:03 pm by Kellyanneg



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