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 Posted: Sun Sep 8th, 2019 03:03 pm
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Andrea

 

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This reads easy. The story is pretty good. It became interesting when I find out there is a baby on the way. That was nice.

This verse seems weak. Maybe more about what he might miss while away?:

I'll be home soon
have no fear of that
I'll cover miles quickly
very soon I'll be back



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