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 Posted: Sun Sep 1st, 2019 04:23 pm
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cmaja



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Hey Bunny,
I tried not to identify the gender whereas it could be sung by either. But I never thought of a duet. That’s intriguing! I kinda felt this lyric was mediocre but you’ve shown me a whole new perspective. And after the fourth stanza add an instrumental reflecting the bridge, and then repeat the fourth stanza with a build for a finale. What do you think?

Charles



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