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 Posted: Fri Aug 30th, 2019 11:26 am
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jamestoffee



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Sounding good. I like the gtr effect you're using.

Here are some tweaks on the lyrics to take or toss...

Verse 1:
She came out of the closet
With (HER DIARY/THE TRUTH HELD) in her hands
WRINGING her fingers
Hoping they would understand

Pre-Chorus:
Closing her eyes
Telling her story
Holding tight

Chorus:
She won't go back to the lonely days, hiding herself away
Won't go back to the lonely days, SHE'S HERE TO STAY

Verse 2:
She FELT EVERY reaction
(From) BEING HERSELF as she opened their eyes
Sympathy and kindness
Anger and surprise

Pre-Chorus 2:
Speaking her mind
Telling her story
Walking in pride

Chorus

Bridge:
Some let go, some held TIGHTER
NOW she knows the PRIZE/PRICE OF BEING A FIGHTER

<break>

Chorus x 2

Thanks for sharing.

James

Last edited on Fri Aug 30th, 2019 11:27 am by jamestoffee



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