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 Posted: Wed Aug 28th, 2019 10:13 pm
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Andrea

 

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This is so sweet. It's simple words said very well.

I might consider dropping the I here:
"Your past is where you were hurt
I know I'm here to stay" - Know I am here to stay.

I also feel that the last verse is very similar to the one before. If you could draw on another idea that might be even better.



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