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 Posted: Fri Aug 16th, 2019 04:57 am
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bunnythesinger



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Andrea, I really like this. The only line that threw me was the line about the Zodiac...wasn't sure where it came from...that was the first and last reference to it i saw...but it works rhythmically. This is definitely a keeper...
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