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 Posted: Sun Aug 11th, 2019 05:29 am
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cmaja



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This is pretty cool, BRD. It well structured and moves smoothly. You may want to make it more compact. There are a lot of words that could be cut. The ‘you’ at the end of the chorus doesn’t put that personage it the best light, if that’s all, besides daydreams, the singer has —almost a disappointment. But I like it overall!

Charles



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