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 Posted: Sun Aug 11th, 2019 01:07 am
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bunnythesinger

 

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I like this BRD.... I was having so much fun with the first 2 verses ...i understood why you went to the present with the drive bys...but id love to hear you repeat verse 2 or part of it at the end after v3 and chorus just to bring back the reminiscing part.

Last edited on Sun Aug 11th, 2019 01:07 am by bunnythesinger



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