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 Posted: Fri Aug 9th, 2019 02:55 pm
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jamestoffee



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There is a lot I like here in the chord progression and some of the lines like "But the sky, has just fallen in" "Love must die so we can live""Like your words cant be unspoken"

One thing that is unclear is if the chorus is the words the person who left said to the singer and those are the words "rattling 'round" OR is the singer talking to himself, so without understanding the POV, it's a bit hard to understand the message.

Also, consider using a guitar tuner before you hit record so the tuning doesn't distract from the song presentation.

Thanks for sharing.

James



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