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 Posted: Tue Aug 6th, 2019 03:58 am
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Kel

 

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BRD wrote:
Man, good write. Hits you in the feels. I'm left wondering about Annie's mom. Would another stanza be too much or make the song run too long?

Good thought... I'm thinking a coda rather than a verse... thanks for the idea...



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