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 Posted: Sun Jul 21st, 2019 08:42 pm
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mike67



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Hi Charles. Clever writing and I love the coda at the end. Might be worth adding a few imperfect rhymes, just to surprise the listner and add a bit of variety. I'd love to hear the words put to a tune.



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