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 Posted: Sun Jul 14th, 2019 11:06 am
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mike67



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I like the story, and the words trip off the tongue. Not sure I'd understand it without explanation, but that really doesn't really matter; the words sit well together in a very poetic way and that'll create the mood you want - sure it'll sound great sung. I couldn't quite get the rhythm in the chorus, so very interested to hear it sung.

Mike



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