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 Posted: Sun Jul 7th, 2019 12:27 pm
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Hi everybody !

Who is good in writing a great lyric for my song
“Skyfall” ? Other Title also possible

Here’s the music :

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1fqdqSzSKyQmKVqS3b9oe2BM900UOztgT

Please consider to maintain the exact !! rhythm of my vocal melody in your lyric.

Verse line 1 : 16 syllables
Verse line 2 : 16 syllables
Rise line 1 : 6 syllables
Chorus line 1 : 8
Chorus line 2: 10
Chorus line 3 : 8
Chorus line 4: 10
Chorus last line : 7

It needs words that end in each line with “a”,“o”,“u”,“e” , because
I hold the notes.

I have sung some senseless words you might pickup and use them if you like...

Please just orientate only on the first verse and first chorus, because it might be so that I sung the following verses and chorus a little bit different which is not done by my intention.
When I will record the song I will defintlay hold on the structure of Verse 1 and Chorus 1.

The most important thing for me is that the lyric fits like a perfect glove on the melody and is easy ! to sing.

So, post your lyric proposals here for Verse 1 and the Chorus, and if I can sing it well I get in touch with you so you can complete it.

I will close the thread in 2 weeks, and if there is a lyric proposal that suits, I let you know.
Thanks for your proposals in advance.


Cheers, Steve Sledge

Last edited on Sun Jul 7th, 2019 03:39 pm by stmoeller60

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