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 Posted: Fri Jun 14th, 2019 06:00 am
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cmaja



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You have a sweet lyric here, Alan. Nice inner rhyme on the first and third lines of the verses. May I suggest adding a chorus in the middle.

I can hear the music as l’m reading it. Good work!

Charles



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