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 Posted: Wed Jun 12th, 2019 05:18 pm
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cmaja



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I like this song! I can picture the whole event as it unfolds. The verses are structured perfectly with the music and it’s sung well. In the first line “considerable” is one syllable too big. You may try “notable” instead. Good job though.

Charles



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