|View single post by RainyDayMan|
|Posted: Wed Jun 5th, 2019 10:25 am||
|It's a good one Mike.
It feels bitter, lonely and wounded, as it should.
My fav lines were these:
From a father to my daughter
To a, why’d you even bother
I’ve sank just like a ship out on the sea
Though I like the rhyming in the first verse too.
Hope you get it set to music!