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 Posted: Wed Jun 5th, 2019 11:25 am
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RainyDayMan



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It's a good one Mike.
It feels bitter, lonely and wounded, as it should.

My fav lines were these:
From a father to my daughter
To a, why’d you even bother
I’ve sank just like a ship out on the sea


Though I like the rhyming in the first verse too.

Hope you get it set to music!



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