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 Posted: Wed Jun 5th, 2019 04:35 am
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M.P. Dudash



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Longshadows, some really killer lines in here. Smelled like anguish and cigarettes, and they seldom looked up from their poison of choice. Excellent imagery. I do think there are areas where it can be condensed a bit, but the structure is there. A little fine tuning and you’re there. Nice job.



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