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 Posted: Mon Jun 3rd, 2019 05:31 am
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 M.P. Dudash wrote:
David, definitely has a modern country vibe to it with the subject matter and rhyme scheme. I would change the chorus line to I’ll pick up your heart as I feel that line is a bit wordy. Up to you. Btw, you may want to put a copyright © at the end along with your name and a date.

Thanks for the feedback, especially the copyright stuff ill definity start doing that. as for the other thing, i think if you listen to it (posted link above) it will clear up how that line fits
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