View single post by M.P. Dudash
 Posted: Mon Jun 3rd, 2019 01:34 am
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M.P. Dudash



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David, definitely has a modern country vibe to it with the subject matter and rhyme scheme. I would change the chorus line to I’ll pick up your heart as I feel that line is a bit wordy. Up to you. Btw, you may want to put a copyright © at the end along with your name and a date.



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