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 Posted: Sat Jun 1st, 2019 03:32 am
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RainyDayMan



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 I like your chorus. That feels like the strongest part to me. I can easily imagine singing that out.

I don't personally connect with the emotion here. Choosing to be someone's rebound seems odd to me, like it doesn't really matter whether they truly like you or not, as long as they will be your partner. But hey that could be just me!
Sounds like you've had plenty of other positive feedback before.

I don't think the hook here is quite as strong as 'Vinyl' but it all flows smoothly and structurally it all looks good.



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