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 Posted: Fri May 31st, 2019 01:36 am
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RainyDayMan



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Very nice Mike! Lovely hook and the whole lyric is very smooth.

You might consider 'Whiskey On A Rose' as your title and drop the Pouring.

The only line that wasn't clear to me was:
It’s always, the first to go
And that's not a bad one, just wasn't sure why it was there.

Slow, sad, drinking song. A Mike Dudash special ;)



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