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 Posted: Fri May 17th, 2019 09:33 am
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RainyDayMan



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I think this is wonderful Kel. Sad but not maudlin.

I love the chorus and especially:
You never had a chance,
Not to run wild and free in a meadow at play,
Nor to kick up your heels in a dance


and another line that caught my eye was:
To who but God knows where
that's really nicely done to fit the meter.

I can certainly imagine this as a modern folk song a la Mumford & Songs.



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